Helping Hudson - Sketch Challenge

The sketch challenge really was quite a challenge!  I like circles and use them in my scrapbooking often and smaller circles on cards but never like this before.

My first attempt I dont particularly like.  With a regular sized card the circles are smallish and I was just not happy with the outcome. 

Paper: Chocolate Chip, Barely Banana, retired DSP
Ink: Chocolate Chip
Ribbon Barely Banana